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Emo v.g.m. : school by ~vofgofm33:iconvofgofm33:

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School starts in the morn a monster is born. The teachers the books the lies and the looks. Its an attack on your soul its all back. The fear of being alone and the girls on the phone. its a horror like anyother take it from me. I'm also tired of those kids who are all gangsterly. I dont realy like there kind I wont let drugs corupt my mind. If you want to know what I sought its probaly not what you thought. Its not popularity grades fortune or fame cant you see I'm not the same. I want a sanctum to see the wrongs that we've done that way nobody has to load a gun. We are all equal there should be no chart who we are is decided by heart. Please D.A. what do you say. Help me end this nightmare here my call its for us all
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Submitted: August 27, 2007
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school starts tommorow for me (28th)
i wrote this poem explaining how school is the suck
i also needed somewhere to rant cus for the first time in my life i think i'm overwhelmed.
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~Aetheros:iconAetheros: Aug 27, 2007, 10:21:12 AM
Whatchu talkin' bout!? School rocks!
~DJDaVinster:iconDJDaVinster: Aug 27, 2007, 11:35:28 AM
School starts on the 4th for me! >8D

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~SonicFan2006:iconSonicFan2006: Aug 27, 2007, 3:43:10 PM
ROAR.
Today I got back to school.
*shivers*

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Can you say "Super Fresh Super Store" five times fast?
~DJDaVinster:iconDJDaVinster: Aug 27, 2007, 6:22:29 PM
LAWLZ@CHU!

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~vofgofm33:iconvofgofm33: Aug 28, 2007, 1:39:07 PM
the diference is your a senior or in colege now? i'maa freshman

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~Ravyn1078:iconRavyn1078: Aug 29, 2007, 2:31:22 PM
I love this because it's so true. From the kids who are "gangsta" to the drug asbuse the excessive calls, the stress under homework, and being a teen doesnt help. we all see things differently, we all hate the school system, and fight with our parents if we dont get what we want. We can't help but be sucked in by the so called friends, the hurtful words, the cliques and the physical and mental abuse. The sex even, yea I'm saying it, every one of us who are about to or are in high school will think about it at least once in there four years of high school.(sex ed. peoples.)
It shouldn't matter what clothes you wear, whether you have a big ass pimple in the middle of your forehead or not, or even whether your cool enough to date that guy that all the cheerleaders fight about, or that girl who every guy can't help but stare at. It's not fair how fucked up this worlds become. The gang related violence makes me fear going to a public school now. No one should have to put up with the thought of "Am i goign to be shot today in the hall?" every single day. It's not right.

Now that I've ranted, I'm going to fav this XD. :P

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~SonicFan2006:iconSonicFan2006: Aug 30, 2007, 1:01:07 PM
*cries*

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Can you say "Super Fresh Super Store" five times fast?
~DJDaVinster:iconDJDaVinster: Aug 30, 2007, 2:45:24 PM
:3

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